One of the most common questions I get from students is "what was
your favorite essay." It's a hard question to answer because I have read so
many excellent essays over the years and could never pick just one
favorite. Instead, I often talk about what makes an essay good. Notice
that I didn't say great or memorable. Every essay doesn't have to be
off-the-charts amazing. They don't have to be destined for publication
(more on that later). They have to be good. Aim for good.
A
good essay conveys the voice and personality of the writer. A good
essay shares something that hasn't come through in the other parts of
the application. A good essay has made it to it's final form after a
round or two of editing. So how does this all come together? Well, I
have three main pieces of advice that I give every year:
1. Don't "Overthink" the Topic
The
essay prompts colleges give you are deliberately broad because we want
students to have some room to take an essay in whatever direction feels
right for them. I think some people spend a lot of time googling essay
prompts (that's a major source of traffic for the blog in the fall)
because the think someone will tell them what the college wants. What we
want is to get to know you through these essays. Use the topic that
lets you be authentic in your writing.
As you get
closer to the deadline, you may start hearing others talk about their
essays. Don't let other people's essays make you second guess your
topic. You may be tempted to change your essay. I don't think this is
always a good idea. You probably wrote with more authenticity about your
first choice topic than you will if you use a topic that popped into
your head during a moment of panic.
2. Don't Feel Beholden to the Academic Essay Format
Many
students are taught to write the "five paragraph essay" in school (I
learned it when I was in grade school, too!). This kind of essay has an
introduction, three supporting paragraphs, and a conclusion. This format
is fantastic for class or for a testing situation, but it's not
necessarily the best way to let your personality shine through. Don't
feel obligated to use the academic essay format for your application
essays. Application essays are personal statements. Use the format that
works best for the story or message you want to convey.
I usually tell students to free write first and then cobble together the structure that makes sense for their essay.
3. Get Some Advice.
It's smart to get someone you trust to look over your essays. Remember, though, that these essays need to convey
your voice
and style, not someone else's. When someone gives you advice that you
find helpful, rework it to fit your style. If someone gives you advice
that doesn't feel right, don't use it. This sounds obvious, but when you
are having a moment of self-doubt, you may need a reminder.
If you're a parent reading this, try to empower your student to say no when the advice they are getting isn't right for them. There are some well-meaning, but not necessarily helpful folks who may want to chime in during this process. The student is the expert on what a high school senior sounds like. They should have final say in what goes into their essays.
Bonus Tip: Don't Be Intimidated by "Essays that Worked."
The
first time you have to do anything, it's really common to google it. If
you google "college application essays," you will come across some
essays that will be said to have gotten someone into a dream school.
First of all, an essay alone doesn't do that. A compelling application,
which includes well-written, interesting essays gets someone into college.
Second,
essays that get published are not normal. Most
application essays are never going to see publication. It's fine to look
for inspiration online and in books, but do not let an essay about some
great feat convince you that your essays needs to be over-the-top
impressive. Again,
those essays aren't normal.
Most
students talk about everyday things in their essays. They write about
an academic interest, an activity, a family situation, or a work of
art/music/literature. The way you can distinguish yourself from the
other students who are going to write about that same topic? You write
about why that thing is important
to you instead of writing about why it's important
to all people.
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